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'Without so much as a call or a letter – he showed up.' Is this grammatically correct?

English Language & Usage Asked by d.c.t on April 16, 2021

Is the sentence below grammatically correct?

Without so much as a call or a letter – he showed up.

I know that dashes can be used to emphasize parenthetical information, but I feel as though the parenthetical element typically comes within a set of dashes or after a single dash, not before. After all, dashes typically draw attention to and emphasize what comes after (or within).

Therefore, does placing a dash after a parenthetical element still draw attention to the parenthetical element, or does it draw attention to the independent clause? Is it even grammatically correct to use a dash in a sentence with a parenthetical element to emphasize the independent clause rather than the parenthetical?

Here’s an example of what I’m wondering:

He showed up – without so much as a call or a letter. (The emphasis on "without so much…" in this sentence, yes?)

Without so much as a call or a letter – he showed up. (The emphasis is on "…he showed up" in this sentence, yes? But is this grammatically appropriate? Stylistically?)

Thank you!

One Answer

Either option is fine. The second sentence where 'he showed up' is at the end of the sentence adds emphasis to the suddeness with which he appeared. It's really only a question of sylistic preference by the writer here.

Answered by Mozibur Ullah on April 16, 2021

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