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Which sentence is better, if I change "in a way that" to "how", should I leave "in"?

English Language & Usage Asked on October 9, 2020

As I am learning English, the more I study, the more I am confused…

Termite mounds are built in a way that hot air rises out and cool air comes in.

in that sentence, if I want to change “a way that” to “how”, should I still use “in” or removing “‘in” is better?

One Answer

Your question is based on practice in constructing relative clauses. One type of relative clause uses a relative adverb. There are three relative adverbs:

  • when: of time (Do you remember the time when I broke my arm?)
  • where: of place (London is the city where I was born.)
  • why: of reason (I'd like to know the reason why you said that.)

(More information here: https://www.grammarwiz.com/relative-adverbs.html)

You cannot use how as a relative adverb. So none of the following sentences is grammatical:

  • *Termite mounds are built in a way how hot air rises out and cool air comes in.
  • *Termite mounds are built how hot air rises out and cool air comes in.
  • *Termite mounds are built in how hot air rises out and cool air comes in.

The original sentence is fine, although I think it can be slightly improved by the addition of such:

  • Termite mounds are built in such a way that hot air rises out and cool air comes in.

For me, this gives a little more emphasis to the intention behind the building method.

Answered by Shoe on October 9, 2020

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