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Subordinate clauses embedded within subordinate clauses

English Language & Usage Asked by Zero dono on August 25, 2021

Relative pronouns like who, that and which introduce a relative clause. Since these relative clauses can’t stand by themselves, they are subordinate clauses. Moreover, these relative clause function in three ways: as noun clauses, adjectival clauses or adverbial clauses. You can embed a subordinate clause within a noun clause. However, how will the rules of comma usage function then?

Is it:

The boy knows that if he kills the woman, he will be sent to prison.

Or:

The boy knows that if he kills the woman he will be sent to prison.

Why I’m asking this question is that this isn’t your normal subordinate clause that begins with subordinate conjunction. A subordinate clause that begins with a subordinate conjunction doesn’t come after a verb, but this does; so how will the rules function in this case.

2 Answers

The boy knows [that if he kills the woman he will be sent to prison].

The subordinate clause in brackets is a declarative content clause introduced by the clause subordinator "that", and functioning as complement of the verb "know".

Within that clause is a conditional construction, where the protasis consists of the preposition phrase "if he kills the woman", in which the subordinate clause "he kills that woman" is complement of "if". The apodosis consists of "he will be sent to prison", i.e. the matrix clause minus the protasis.

A comma between the apodosis and the protasis is optional.

Answered by BillJ on August 25, 2021

From BillJ's answer

A comma between the apodosis and the protasis is optional.

Agreed. I'd like to add that here I would choose the comma option. I had an editor once who told me commas can also indicate a breath or a pause for the reader. In this case, I'm reading the actual content of the sentence. The final portion of the sentence indicates a consequence. I'd be sure to pause before stating it so that the reader gets the full impact. FWIW

Answered by l1salach1spa on August 25, 2021

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