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parallelism in a sentence

English Language & Usage Asked on December 15, 2020

A public authority was looking to improve productivity, transparency of information and better manage public funds

What would be the correct way to write the above statement?

A public authority was looking to improve productivity, offer more transparency in information and better manage public funds?

One Answer

You should have a list of verbs or a list of nouns, so your second statement, with the list of verbs, is good. You could have a list of nouns with "A public authority is looking to improve productivity, transparency of information and management of public funds". The alternative in the comment is another possibility, but of the three I prefer your second statement.

Note that "looking" in this context means "intending" or "aiming", so it is correct without being changed to "looking forward".

Answered by Peter on December 15, 2020

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