English Language & Usage Asked by Talbert1209 on December 22, 2020
I’m writing a blog post about the impacts of an autoimmune disease. The sentence I’m trying to construct looks like this:
"The disease importunately follows me around like a god damn…"
I’m struggling to come up with something better than "… Puppy who lost his ball."
Any suggestions? The cruder, the better. A pop culture reference would be awesome!
I’m stuck.
Though I would love to brainstorm with you about the crudest possible metaphors in private, I'll confine my comment here to how I would construct these:
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Correct answer by piojo on December 22, 2020
I am familiar with "Follows me around like a teenager handing me a mask."
For your purposes Reprovingly would work but is almost antique.
reprovingly - in a reproving or reproachful manner; "she spoke to him reprovingly"
Reproachfully is only slightly better. I'm kind of getting away from how it follows and more towards how it makes you feel; Miserably, Pathetically...
How about Accusingly. There! That's it for me.
Answered by Elliot on December 22, 2020
How about stalker? From M-W:
stalker: a person who stalks : a person who pursues someone obsessively and aggressively to the point of harassment
You example:
"The disease importunately follows me around like a god damn stalker."
Just to be clear, stalker is a metaphor for the autoimmune disease. You just can't make it go away. You can replace "goddamn" with a cruder adjective, if you'd like.
Answered by Richard Kayser on December 22, 2020
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