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Is the bold part of the following sentence grammatically correct?

English Language & Usage Asked on August 5, 2021

It was naturally assumed the temple was burned down as an anti-revolution symbol in those dark days, but as it turned out, revealed by the village elders, it was burned down under much more mysterious circumstances.

I want to express the idea that the fact that the temple was burned down under much more mysterious circumstances was revealed to the narrator by the village elders, but is it grammatically correct to insert the bold part for this purpose into the whole sentence?

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That sentence doesn't work as it stands, because there is nothing that "revealed by the village elders" could reasonably be taken to describe.

The following is better:

It was naturally assumed the temple was burned down as an anti-revolution symbol in those dark days, but, as was revealed by the village elders, it was burned down under much more mysterious circumstances.

That version implies that the elders revealed the latter fact. But it doesn't imply more specifically that the elders revealed it specifically to the narrator -- for all we know, they could have let the whole village know.

Answered by Rosie F on August 5, 2021

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