English Language & Usage Asked by dnl-blkv on August 29, 2021
Recently I’ve been asked to edit a text and there I observed a phrase that could be simplified to: "Against young professionals trying to find a job in [certain profession], there are two obstructions …". Alternatively, we discussed a version ending with "… are two obstructions" (without "there").
The "obstruction against [something]" part seemed weird to me, and to prove or disprove my gut feeling I did the following:
Even though the above might seem like a sufficient proof of the wording being incorrect, I, being a non-native English speaker, decided to check it here, just to be extra sure.
Is "obstruction against something" grammatically correct? What about the whole phrasing I presented above? If not, how could the same meaning be conveyed in a grammatically correct fashion?
You are probably right in frowning a bit at obstructions, because it is more seldom used than obstacles, as you can check here
As for the grammaticality of your sentence, I think it is not incorrect. However, it might read better if you express it in this way:
There are two obstacles against young professionals trying to find a job in this field.
I do not know the rest of your sentence, but I am sure that one can find a way to fit this sentence in without a problem.
Correct answer by fev on August 29, 2021
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