English Language & Usage Asked by Syk on May 28, 2021
Can you recognize that her lover is a woman from this part of the sentence?
A doctor’s daughter hides her lover–
I am afraid you cannot, or you automatically think it is a man.
In my language, we use a single word for male or female lover, which is what got me into this situation.
Would the next sentence be more understandable?
A doctor’s gay daughter hides her lover–
Would it be better if I use:
A doctor’s daughter hides her gay lover–
Any other suggestions how to write this without that it is too much on the nose? Is there another, single word for a female lover instead of writing her female lover or gay daughter?
In English, the female equivalent of gay is lesbian. Well, it depends. If you're speaking informally then gay/lesbian could be both used. If speaking formally, you can use homosexual
Answered by bio on May 28, 2021
You don't need any special vocabulary here. You can simply say:
A doctor’s daughter hides her female lover ...
This is perfectly fine and idiomatic and is probably the closest to the meaning of the sentence in the Original Poster's language. One could easily also say:
However, this overtly draws attention to the lover's sexual orientation in a way that the more neutral rendering with female does not.
Answered by Araucaria - Not here any more. on May 28, 2021
It would seem to me that based on your comment about another language that what you're looking for is a way to communicate the gender without creating a sentence that makes it transparent that the gender is somehow important or that the writer is purposefully attempting to communicate it.
I indeed agree with others that “female lover” would be the simplest answer, but like all the other answers in English that sentence implies that the lover's gender is relevant to the story, much like “rich lover” would.
There is no way to communicate the gender in English without that implication, as far as I know, as one can with words such as “brother” or “aunt”, which communicate gender without arousing that impression.
Answered by Zorf on May 28, 2021
A doctor’s daughter hides her lover
Two suggestions
A doctor’s daughter hides her lover, Janet ...
P.S. You should avoid asking exactly the same question on two different Stack Exchanges, so you could perhaps delete this one, or phrase the new version more generally.
Answered by chasly - supports Monica on May 28, 2021
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