Does this sentence make sense?

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Does this make sense in a creative sense and it is grammatically or structurally correct?

A heart so pure angel would implore

What I'm trying to get at is "a heart so pure that it makes angels envious". It makes sense in my head but I might be thinking in another language. Another sentence structure I thought of is

A heart so pure angels would die for

or

Angels would die for a heart so pure

Tasch · Answer

The third one seems like the best one.
Maybe the first could be adjusted to "A heart so pure an angel would implore for it" but that kind of takes down the short-and-sweet aspect. The first one makes enough sense but maybe see if you can rearrange the words to be a bit clearer

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