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Do we need "on" in this sentence?

English Language & Usage Asked on March 18, 2021

In Steve Jobs’s biography by Walter Isaacson, the author writes:

…another health issue that became increasingly problematic, one that
medical researchers didn’t focus on as rigorously as they did cancer
or pain.

I feel like you need an additional on after they did:

focus on as rigorously as they did on cancer.

It wouldn’t be necessary if there were no they did but maybe I am missing something?

One Answer

I would always edit examples of this sort to include “on”, although it is not grammatically essential. Doing so keeps the reader’s attention on the original mention of focussing.

Answered by Anton on March 18, 2021

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