Should this sentence be split in two, or is my use of "all of which" grammatically correct?

English Language Learners Asked by jerYacoub on December 17, 2020

Just wondering if my sentence is too long, confusing, or grammatically incorrect!

I completed two primary school placements in opposite socioeconomic areas as well as volunteer in two youth clubs, all of which occurred while I worked a part-time job and completed my school work.

Your knowledge and wisdom would be appreciated! 🙂

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